Headwaters Wordsmithing

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Birthed in the Northwoods of Wisconsin,  Headwaters Wordsmithing creates screenplays, lyrics, and books with an emphasis on faith in God...and a minor emphasis on coffee.  Make yourself at home.

Storm Walking

This project was inspired by the painting, "The Laughing Jesus".  It's my idea of how the story in John 6:16-21 might have unfolded.  This is just a coffee-cup pondering, not an excavation of deeper theology.  I hope you enjoy it.

     Grunting heavily, he pushes hard on the weathered bow of the fishing boat.  He hears John straining on the other side, muttering something unintelligible.  The small craft slowly leaves the beach, then starts to glide easily.

     Quickly the two men dive and crawl over the gunwales, rocking the boat from side-to-side.  James, Andrew, Simon, Philip, and Judas are already pulling on the oars.  Matthew is looking a little perplexed.  Peter points to an open space and nods.  Relieved, Matthew scrambles over to the spot and tries to get into a rowing rhythm with the others. 

      Peter smiles at John who grins back.  They share a growing fondness for the tax collector, even if he doesn’t know anything about fishing – or boats.

     “So how’s He gonna get over to Capernaum?”

     Peter glances at the retreating shore.

     “I dunno.  He could have someone sail Him out to us or He might get a ride around on the shore road.  He’s got His own way of doin’ things.  We’ll just wait for Him if we beat Him there.  You in a big hurry, Thunder?”

     “Not me.  I’m full of bread’n’fish and lookin’ for a good night’s sleep.  Might even sleep in ‘til dawn.”

     The rowers chuckle as John and Peter take their places. Everyone falls into a  slow, easy pull as the talk subsides, the conversations replaced with the quiet sounds of creaking wood, a light breeze, and parting water.  The shore and the sun soon disappear, replaced by a rising moon and early stars.  James, John’s brother, feels it first.

     “Where’d that wind come from?”

     John feels it, too.  Looking up at the moon, he sees a few fast-moving clouds scud by.

     “Peter.  Whaddaya think?”

     Everyone stops rowing and eleven pairs of eyes look at the big man near the stern.

     “I think it’s almost as far back as it is forward.  If it stays like this, we’ll be okay.”

     John nods at James who goes back to work.  The rowing begins to take on more urgency as the wind pushes the waves higher.   Each time the small, bright moon pops out between clouds they catch glimpses of small, white-capped waves glinting silver in the brief light.

     Wind and waves gradually become more intense, like the choreographed crescendo of dances they’ve known since childhood.  The fishermen among them know there is no celebration in this dance.  Even Matthew can feel it.

     Peter turns his head to bellow against the wind’s growing howl.

     “Keep her nose into the wind.  We turn, we sink.”   

    John gives him a grim nod. Peter forces a smile and turns to his oar.

     The waves become quick, wet hills that tax their strength.  The spray drenches them as they methodically pull and lift the oars.  The wind roughly flips wet hair, sending a chill through wet clothes and deep into hearts.

     Time stops.  No one can remember how long they’ve been rowing.  Life has been condensed to a simple rhythm.   Lift...pull...lift...pull.  No conversation.  No banter.  There's just pain; the pain of aching backs, leaden arms, and aching hands.  Lift...pull...lift...

     Matthew sees it first.  He stops rowing to roughly rub his eyes.  Then he screams.

     “WHAT’S THAT?!”

     Eleven weary heads turn to where Matthew points.  Twelve sets of eyes go wide, the rowing forgotten.  The moon spotlights a figure just a stone’s throw behind the boat and off to one side. The howling wind doesn’t disturb its long hair or the long robe as it walks on the only calm, flat patch of water for miles.  The deliberate, relaxed stride is smoothly efficient as the figure begins to catch up to the boat.

     “It’s a GHOST!”

     “Great God – HELP US!”


     Peter’s voice jolts them back to reality.  Oars bite the water while eyes watch the figure move alongside the boat.  The moonlight and the broken, scudding mass of clouds make the figure seem to blink off, then on.

     John shouts over the wind.


     Peter stops rowing.  Quickly he crawls over to grip the side of the tossing boat, his eyes straining to see.  The figure turns its head, looks at Peter, and smiles.

     Peter’s heart leaps against his ribs.  He recognizes that smiling face as it slowly turns away.  The figure continues to walk past them.

     Peter knows what he must do.  His choice erupts from a knowledge that has been ingested through months of interaction.  A choice that now becomes a reflexive act.  He knows he must follow Him.  Wherever that is going to take him doesn’t really matter.  He just knows he has to follow.  Peter screams against the wind.


     The figure stops.  Jesus turns to face the boat.  Moonlight spotlights His huge smile.  Chuckling, He stretches out His arm to motion with His hand.


     Peter leaps from the boat, vaulting smoothly over the gunwale to land lightly on his feet.  He walks toward Jesus, his eyes locked on that glowing smile.  The Master’s laugh penetrates the storm, making Peter grin back.  

     A gust of wind lashes wet hair across an eye.  Peter blinks at the sting, quickly brushing it away.  And now he sees the sea.

     Things seem to happen very slowly.  All his senses are heightened.  He can smell the sea, that peculiar life-death smell of water, plants, and fish.  His ears hear the faint cries from the boat, the hissing sound of the waves, and the howling of the wind.  He feels his feet getting wet, his toes starting to drag through the water.  He is sinking.  Terrified, he tries to run.  The water is grabbing at his knees, now his waist.  He looks to the side to see a massive wave bearing down on him.  The moonlight seems to be igniting the foam along its edge into a deadly white flame.

     There’s only one thing to do.  He reaches out as far as he can before the water covers his face.  He uses his last breath to scream.

     “LORD, SAVE ME!”

     The world disappears.  He is in darkness, a wet darkness that is suffocating him. He sinks, weighted down by the obvious truth that dooms a fisherman without a boat in an angry sea.  Suddenly his hand feels a grip so strong it startles him.  He feels himself being rocketed out of the water.  He blinks - and there is the smiling face of Jesus.  They are eye-to-eye.  Face-to-face.

     “My Peter of little faith.  Don’t doubt!”

     Peter drops his hands to his knees, coughing violently while standing on the only calm, flat piece of water for miles.  Jesus slaps him gently on the back until the coughing subsides.  Peter sheepishly looks at his Master, not knowing why he feels so ashamed.  Jesus puts His arm over the soaked fisherman, squeezing and tussling Peter in a playful way.

     “Believe, Peter.  Just believe.  C’mon.  Let’s get you in a boat.”

     The others have been rowing hard to maintain position next to the two water walkers.  All oars stopped moving as the two men step into the boat.  No one speaks.  Simon is the first to notice. 

     “Wha . . .?”

     His look of bewilderment appears on eleven other faces.

     The setting moon is mirrored by a flat, wave-less sea.  The cacophony of wind is instantly gone, replaced by a deafening calm.  The eastern horizon is glowing with the red-gold blush of sunrise.

     All eyes but two grew wider still as the bow of the boat grounds itself into land.

     Peter turns slowly to look at the shore, touching his soaked clothes to remind himself of what had really happened.  That enjoyable, familiar laugh turns everyone’s face to the back of the boat.

      “Welcome to Capernaum.” smiles Jesus, “You gentlemen have had quite the night.”

     The Master lightly jumps over the side into the shallow, still water, resting His hands on the gunwale while looking at His men.  Men He will gladly die for and men who will gladly die for Him.  His smile nods towards shore.

     “C’mon.  Let’s get some breakfast.”

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